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Love-Lust&&Dirt-Sin[[Raves&&Bedroom stages]]

I can feel it rattle the cage, rave inside my head
Need you under my skin, mouth to mouth&&head to clevage
This is end[beggining] of you&&I,&&I'm begging again
To bleed for your nails to my back, [[dig in deep, bby]]
Wishing you would never ever stop,&&let me lay here through time

You swear you haven't told a single lie, it consisted of 8 letters&&a heart
I almost said "I love you, too" But it was all too reall
3 months to the date, You say you've found someone new
&&I need a feel good drag, to bring me down to your level
[[Hold your breath]] I already knew about him babygirl

I've heard your excuses for everything, but yell at me again
We'll be on the floor in 2.5,&&fall in love with the sin
You make me as sick as i do you, [[It's not a secret]]
But our hearts would've broken if you'd really said goodbye

I can see the way our time has been wasted, by an almost tomorrow
[[Fucking bitch]] She loves me not, She loves me not!
But I'm not sure I even care about loving you anymore
I could take every little lie you told&&rub it in your face
You wouldn't even dare to push me back [[you enjoy it]]

Girl, you know i'd be wrong to say, we were done
Can't leave it alone, we'd be taking away oxygen
[[&&our automatic in]] just keep playing
Kiss me in the v.i.p lyk i really mean something
Leave alone, but we're going home tonight

I'll love the dirty things you're doing later on
You'll be mad as hell, [[I make good on all my promises]]
&&I meant it when I told you, you weren't sleeping
Pull my hair, pretend it really matters yes or no
I've been faithful, tonight it's your turn

Author notes

Fiction. This is fiction.
Insp.
Almost told you that I loved you- Papa roach
Feel good drag- Amberlin

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  • Jocelyn.Jaded
    September 26

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    <3 I love "almost told you that I loved you" by papa roach. xD And I was thinking of that song while I was reading this. I really love the begining x]. Great write. xo

  • summore
    July 18

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    Many emotions displayed, underrated and over the top. If it works for the poet then let all readers indulge. No revision needed ! I've been faithful, tonight it's your turn!