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Care To Criticize

Care To Criticize

A Thousand eyes that criticize
with hatred on their lips

Ever spilling harmful slurs
and scowls that pierce the skin

Tearing deep beneath the flesh
the body goes unharmed

Wounds that bandage cant appease
ceast by one apology

Author notes

you never know just how much a simple apology can help

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  • Fallen-Thumper
    July 18

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    WOW!! O.O
    You authors notes are right. This is brilliant and speaks so much. It is amazing and really well written. I loved it. Amazing!
    I really loved it. And the words are fantastic!