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Can't go back any further

Summit
plunge to the top
smile
and say you did it
are you happy now
no?
wonder why
smile again
does it hurt any less?

Author notes

not done

Could this all be in my head?

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  • TwiztidMaggot
    July 18

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    looking pretty good so far! You are doing very well. Can't wait to read the rest of it!!!

    TwiztidMaggot