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Abandoned!

I adored you once, You were my reason for living
But you abandoned me, cruely and unforgiven.
I clung to you, to protect me from the hurt and the pain
But you pushed me away, and used me for your own gain.

Author notes

List A - Adored
List B - Abandoned

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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    July 19

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    Wow. This was short but incredibly powerful. You did an amazing job with the words chosen for the prompt. Can you please put the words chosen in the Author Note? Thanks.
    Thank you for entering the contest and best of luck.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~