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Forked a Total Mistake

A table set for two
champgne and glasses
Candles lit for a romantic setting
they sit and talk
Enjoy the romance in the air tonight
the setting glows so bright
in time for a romantic kiss
Music and slow dancing on the floor
they sat and ate
Nakeya proposed to Nikita
a very beautiful diamond goes on
her finger
As he gives her a big hug
her fork goes through his heart
She forgot it was in her hand
she got so excited
Everyone stood back in aw
as Nakita cryed
for the man of her life
and childs father
She just found out she was pregnant
she was waiting for the right time to tell
Nakeya and now
it is to
late

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Darlene Long

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Comments

  • Haha, wow. I laughed when her fork went through his heart.
    I must have a sick sense of humor. Hahaha.
    good job
    good luck!

  • Wow. This is a very sad. It goes well with the prompt. I enjoyed reading this.

    Mike

  • gee what an engagement a cool little poem with a twist i liked this one