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Your Shadow

Can you feel my heart trembling
hear it beating louder than before?
I must be changing, I don't
know who I am anymore

Here I am, so willing
For you to come over and take it all
When was I so foolish
to make myself so vulnerable?

Can you feel it in the air
as the summer is sliding in so slow
Something's changed, I feel different
and I just want to let myself go

Foolish me for dreaming dreams
That never turn out the way they seem
And foolish me, the loving fool
blazing from the shadow of you

From the shadow of you

Can you feel my heart trembling?
It's too fragile to play games
The sun is too hot, I am
flourishing in the shade

In the shadow of you

Here I am, so willing
For you to come over and take it all
When was I so foolish
to make myself so vulnerable
Here I am, so stupid
letting myself trip and fall
I still don't know if it's a good thing
that I'm so happy in your shadow

In the shadow of you

Come catch me, I'm weak now
But you're the weakest spot
When did I become something I'm not

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  • xXMe17xX
    July 18

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    good poem!but I feel that ur words are really clisque or how u spell it.maybe it's me?but this piel has depth and it's also very deep!! Great!!