Please don't daddy! Please don't go!
Mommys' getting angry, daddy
Daddy! Don't! No!
We need you here at home daddy
We need your warming love!
Mommy wants to hit us, daddy!
Mommys' off her pills!
I'll put the blade back to my wrists, daddy!
If you decide to leave.
Please, Daddy! Don't!
A contest entry
- Dark Picture Prompt - 18 years old and under ONLY by annother.
700 points, ended July 20, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think? Let me know.
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A very emotional write, indeed. Best of luck.
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Very dark
Not sure I was able to decipher every line as intended, but it is very dark and intense. Best of luck in the contest.
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UNFORTUNATLY
I didn't even get my poem showed
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Emotion inside. But in comparison to other writes, I am slightly confused. I shall have to go back to read. Or you can just message me with a more explanation of what happened some years back for you.
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Ohkay!
I did. Understand now?
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