You called my name
asking me to come back.
but i don't care!
I'm not afraid you'll break my heart,
cuz my hearts to dark to care,
and you cant destroy what isn't there
(guitar solo)
my smile was lost long ago
so if you love me, let it go
i don't wanna know
my heart is made of emptiness
whats good for you is bad for me
cuz i just wanna hear you scream
(drums and screaming)
what i really meant to say
i Finlay realized you're tearing me apart
every time i gave you my heart
you cut it deeper
now my hearts to dark to care
your just another lesson learned
Author notes
hard core. gunna put it to muscic when i get the chance... its for the band im in 
A contest entry
- PRWRITE CONTEST FOR ALL by serenity silvermoon.
900 points, ended August 2, 1023 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
any other topics i should try to wright about?
Comments
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I loved it. This is
a great music peace,
And it has alot of emotion
Great music peice.
Sincely~
XxXGoingInsaneXxX
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What a great song that you wrote here!
You might want to reread it and check your spelling.
Other than that, great work and good luck to you!
Jeremy0826 -
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i just edited it for you, sorry i forget to check every now and then tks
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That's better and thank you for responding!
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