On March 2, 2006
A vile Contest plan to hatch
Tiki Cat and and her pet, Ellis
Got with Snow to Trophy snatch
Tiki Cat got the idea
"Why don't I start a contest?"
Snow said, "You aren't for real!
You are just a pest!"
Tiki said, "You enter, just you
and your poem and I..."
"This idea stinks -- pew!
You will make me cry..."
"I will give you a trophy
that I stole from someone."
"Come here Judge, Lord help me!"
Snow made me come undone!
"Great idea, right?
I'm soooo talent!
This is just not right,
What you here have sent!"
Snow says:
"Pride is what I love about Tiki Cat...
Look, Tiki Cat look so innocence,
Tiki Pride! is where this cat is at...
Her pride is so immense,
how can someone resist
this cute little innocence cat?"
"Snow you've got that right!
That's all there is to that!"
"How? If you keep writing,
one day cat will Rule the World!"
"I will just keep typing
And that day will be unfurled!"
"Love it," said Snow.
"Shove it," said Tiki Cat.
Author notes
Snow (Dreamer Wind) has left AP. She may be living back in China now? We were great friends and wrote this together in 2006.
Honest Opinion?
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I love your imaginative expression. I love the tone of the dialogue. It is awesome to read something that tells a story, makes you smile, and is lighthearted and fun! Oftentimes there is just not enough of that. I should try to write more humor 
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Many a true word is spoken in jest.This could apply to some here.
A great little piece of humour
Excellent
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Tiki has some attitude!
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I love this! Oh what fun! I just want you to know Tiki; you're NOT a pest. Saber and I love you so does Max the wonder cat.
Love,
Amera♥
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real funny, so cute. I wonder though if this doesn't go against the rules of AP by saying stuff about another poet, probably not because it's not mean, it's humorous. keep up the cool writing.
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isnt it fun how cats chatter away,,the contest they hold is probably who catches the most mice,,great fun
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Fun!
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