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Quotes and Boats.

A sexy girl in a tiny boat
Trying hard to keep afloat
She's rowing fast with one old oar
Because she is the local whore

She rows upstream and she rows down
The river takes her into town
She's wrecked so many innocent lives
Because she targets men who all have wives

They pay with cash or credit chits
And then she shows them her big tits
And if they ante up some more
Her knickers fall down to the floor

If they give her all their money
She'll cover their bods in sticky honey
Then she'll lick from head to toe
It's enough to make the old men blow

There isn't much more to be said
Except to put this poem to bed
And say goodbye to whore in a boat
And that's my take on a stupid quote!










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  • pondainwonda silver member
    October 1
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    AWESOME

    that was a top piece of work enjoyed it

  • I am surpised that how a stupid quote inspired you to be a poet..interesting..and that is the strength of the quote..and the subject you took is you nature and thoughts which you have..any way I respect your words..even if you do not..thanks for your words...

  • Well, I thought this was a bit disrespectful to the quote and contest, especially since you called it a "Stupid quote". But out of context I thought it was a really impressive poem. Your words flow smoothly and you rhyme effortlessly, and told an interesting story. I thought you did a great job, although it may not win, but I thought it was ok.
    ~Michaela~


  • Jackle silver member
    July 18
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    As for me your way of writing is amazaing

    But your subject is TERRIBLE. I don't think that is what this contest asked for. I think the Subject could be changed and you could be a very good poet. I don't think you care when you called it a stupid Quote- you just want someone to hear this kind of junk.
    Jacle


    • Nogod
      July 19
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      But its a take on a quote and a picture .. a girl rowing a boat.

      This subject is terrible to you, but amusing to me.

      I'm going to read your poetry over the next week or so ... I will never, ever disrespect you by calling your subject terrible, or whatever.

      As I am not religious I wrote about what the girl was doing.
      How do you know she wasn't?

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