In this condition
am I honest, yet horribly expressive
for time made me remember, no, repeat.
"redundance is I, the walking contradiction."
I say yes, finally! my problems are dead as me
and no! I will bear my cross
but with a little help, the best I can say.
I drop it. ofcourse, then pick it up agian
but then I drop it. mere prayer can't solve.
works! hence my neglegence. the work.
for a condition, is present.
and my present, is hell.
no, presence is a gift from above!
winds, poetry, ah, the color of the seasons.
which are gone! all gone! cursed to its very name
smoted, maimed, mocked!
oh, this irony, this unworthy lamentation!
...atleast in the burden of concious guilt, I try.
suprise me life! In this perpetuality!
oh how could I forget, they were reverently thrown at me
and I ducked.
who but I ducks?
reasonably clear in my head, I denounce my behavior
no retrospect, no point, all aftermath.
oh, the agony! oh, the burden!
I will give in!
if I die a sinner, then my faith is for not.
for I will never stop fighting, never give in!!!
oy... who could call me their friend, no arms know how to hug me
except my Lords.
oh father...help me put on my lord and saviour, Jesus
and make not provisions for my flesh.
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this is excellent! especially this part:
and no! I will bear my cross
but with a little help, the best I can say.
I drop it. ofcourse, then pick it up agian
amazing!
other parts i like:
oh how could I forget, they were reverently thrown at me
and I ducked.
who but I ducks?
the beginning sets the tone perfectly -
In this condition
am I honest, yet horribly expressive
for time made me remember, no, repeat.
i love "time made me remember, no, repeat."!
suprise me life! In this perpetuality!
i have read and reread this piece. i can't say enough about it. captures effortlessly - from beginning to end - the oscillations of being human and the consternation of braving the razor's edge path to salvation from inside the examined life.
one of your best!
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Really? I have to say that this poem, was out of the blue. I don't know it came to me unexpectedely. Thanks so much though!
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wow. very well-done. i really love this poem.
and no! I will bear my cross
but with a little help, the best I can say.
I drop it. ofcourse, then pick it up agian
very great
good job.
-Jewlz
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I really appreciate this comment, it was out of the blue. Thanks!
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no problem. i found the random reading thing ;P
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