Alone with myself
In the deepest level of Hell
These feelings of hatred for life
And the people around me
hijack my mind
Controlled by
A soul filled with Spite
The people around me
I want to Slaughter
Brutally Murder the sons and the daughters
Try to discover why my life is so empty
But I am so lost I cannot think.
My mind has abandond me
along with the people I onced loved
My time for happiness has passed
Suicide is long overdue for the safety of others
With no one to help me
Not a soul to save me
No manual to guide me in
the prison I am imprisoned inside
No chance to prevail
No way to succeed
No reason for glory
No need for greed
I used to care
I used to try
But that was before
My soul had died
Author notes
name: c h a s e H
prompt: Paint It Black by the Rolling Stones
This is a good song, dark and depressing,
much like my life.
A contest entry
- PAINT IT BLACK! by PrInCeSsOfRoCk.
1150 points, ended July 19, 12 entries
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Thank You For Reading
Comments
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hmmm very dark write, spoke to me since i'm in a low point in my life at the moment. enjoyed reading your take on the prompt. thank you for entering
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