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Living in your dream

There is something different in the air
and in words i read just now
about living in another's dreams

about how eyes took hold of me
a hold I gladly share

that so declares a love like no other
a love like fairy tales
like preordained arranged by fate
like movie love like angel love
deep in passionate keep

like a twilight re-writen
like a living Bella Swan
to an edward no less chilling
and thrilling
to me

like a Lanen to her Akor
a living wreathing flame
inside the body of a man
no less binding no less meant to be

like a man upon one knee
like a sonnet sang to me
these words have spoken free
forever

and Shawn

I. Love. You.

Author notes

They say inspiration just comes and writing can't be forced. well for me right now it's midnight i can hardly keep my eyes open and i'm lost asleep in a world not real. but I've read that poem three times and the words never lose there impact on me. I had to get it out of my system. I had to let all the world see me on one knee, that I love my Shawn and nothing will change it. share the love and post this rose on your page if you feel the love from anyone anywhere and share this marvelous feeling of shouting out your love!!!!

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  • karma-n-peace
    September 11

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    Awe...
    The poem is fantastic and describes love the way a smooth and flowing wave sweeps across the shoreline on it's way back out to the wild of the ocean.


  • Silent Saint
    July 21
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    :)

    im glad u liked that poem and i love u more than words could posibly describe i hope to c u soon. i hope i can stay this inspiring to u becuse this is great stuff!