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Chaos Can Be Beautiful (Version 1)


Chaos can be beautiful.
Take delight in the rain.
The clouds are rolling in again,
But there's pleasure where there's pain.

There's a silver lining in the smoke,
a blur in the smog.
A simple sight like a child at play
or a monkey on a log.

Because the world is burning,
but it's still turning,
and life... it will go on.
Just listen to the thunder clap
and try to sing along.


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