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Barely Alive

My Heart is beating slowly
My lungs are caving in
Will you save me?
I feel my body giving up
I see you walking away
As usual you leave me
You always leave me for dead
Why?
I take a look at you, my reflection
And again i ask,
Will you save me, or
leave me for dead?
Because I am
Barely Alive.

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