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The Gift of Light

Evil fills us from within,
Pouring through our veins.
It consumes our soul,
Changing our morals
Into a form unrecognisable.
We become lost in darkness,
Never to be blessed with
The gift of light again.

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  • annother gold member
    July 20
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    Great write. You nailed brevity with this. Best of luck.