Is there a place where the good people go?
Is it up above, or down below?
Do they wither and rot with each passing snow?
Should we simply learn to just let go?
What will death to us bestow?
Will there be harps and will there be bows?
Pull back the curtains, and what will it show?
That is something I'd like to know.
A contest entry
- Something Sacred, Something Lost 1000 pts total, possibly more later by SpydurPoet.
1300 points, ended July 27, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
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i dont like the rhyme in this, it seems somewhat forced. but i do like the piece overall.
the whole heaven/hell/nothing debate has been going on for too long for anything new to be added to it, but i think this is a really sweet piece.
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thank you for the criticism. i love it when somebody gives me something to work off of <3
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its nice when someone appreciates it.
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Wow. Splendid job on the words chosen for the prompt given.
I love the mono-rhyme technique.
Thanks for entering and best of luck in the contest.
Write on.
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thank you!
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