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the end is here and it's beautiful.

the end is here
and it's beautiful
the stars have never
shined so bright
or looked so chaotic

we could lie here forever
no one would come to get us
or move us
or disturb our peace
and it's beautiful

I thought we'd be frightened
or at least nervous
but the end is here
and it's beautiful

we could lie here all night
tangled in each other
while we wait it out
we would wait forever
there's no one but us

and it's beautiful

-- July 17th 2009

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  • Antebellum
    July 27

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    I love the title...although "The" should be capatilized :] sorry lol.
    anyways;
    'and its beautiful'
    the repetition of this is..beautiful.
    a stunning piece.
    good luck.