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Story Of A Mystic Love

Two people,
Two seperate lives.
Brought together by parallel worlds.
This is the story of a mystic love.

Paralyzed limbs,
Screaming hearts,
Silent Pleas...

She'd already lived through it,
day after day.
He's living through it,
fighting with all he's got.

Brought together..
by the same horrible events.

Though a great deal of pain they suffered,
they have been happy ever since.
Terror subsided.

Now the sun shines,
the grass grows,
and hearts sing.

This is the story of a mystic love

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  • St. Poet
    July 18

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    its a good poem... but it left me confused. first, what brought them together? Who are they? everybody has a story. what are they living through? why were they suffering? I know you can add a whole lot more to this one. WHEN, you revise this one. tell me i would like to read it agian. Its got a lot of potential...

    By the way i miss you and the group! hows everybody doing? tell them i said hi plz