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fog







     fog


          circling
                    circling


                                                   gulls

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • condor gold member
    July 25

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    I think i have told you before that i don't quite understand haiku's but i do enjoy coming and looking at them and getting my own visuals from them. This one was quite good because of the wonderful image you showed me of the gull, pure white circling a fog circling the gull. The very best in the contest.


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    July 20

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    such sharpness of image...being that the subject is fog, lol

    i really enjoy haiku so much more when they are not restricted by syllable counts


  • just mercedes gold member
    July 18
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    aha!

    great 'ku


  • Night Hope gold member
    July 18

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    Brevity & a profound visual sense reside within this piece, Scribe. Good luck in the contest, my Friend.




  • Cannonsfire
    July 17

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    Love this and the fact I had to squint to see it,makes it all the more real C


  • MysteriousWhisper
    July 17

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    i love the image that we actually see here without many words. very unique! great job!

  • Nicole Hanna
    July 17
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    Beauty at its simplest.

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