Chiefer (lmfao)
Right about most things
Always my best friend
Ignorant in a funny way lol
Gone
Always in my head
Loving everything about you
Losing you
Everything was done for others
Not here
Attitude with the "bad guys"
Talk to about anything
Killed
In my heart forever
Noisy all night long
Such a GREAT father
Ooutside in the yard you worked
Never to be held ing my arms again
Dont really care.
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A poignant and passionately written poem and tribute .
Written from the heart and touching an emotional cord
within each line . Thank you for sharing this eloquent
poem !! 'Twas a pleasure to read on this day Emily .
Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy
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oh my darling Em..
i have no words for this, it tore my heart out, gripped it and ripped it to shreds, this is one of those piece that make me feel useless in my words, and the words i do use, cant take the pain away.
This was gorgeous, thank you for expressing the pain, and longing to see your brother again.
well done sweetie
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Very touching and a wonderful tribute to a gone but never forgotten brother. You have such an amazing ability to write exactly what you are feeling and pack it those words with so much emotion. Truly wonderful piece. I do have two small things for you to fix. You know me, cant help myself. Plus Im sure you want this work to be perfect in every way. The last two lines. In the first, you have Ooutside. Added an extra o in there dont you think? And in the last, you have held ing. Im sure you meant held in right? Other than those two small things you did an excellent job. True show of tender loving and rememberance for a dearly departed loved one. Keep up the great work.
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