The grey and black clouds swirl
As the thoughts in my mind whirl
The memories in my mind
Shoot a severe pain straight
To my heart.
As my heart wrenches in pain
The clouds and skies open up
Letting loose the rain.
Pouring down and crashing hard
At the same time
My own tears well up and spill over
The pain and agony wreaking havoc
To all of my body
Trembling, crying, squeezing my eyes shut
Trying to live through this moment
Please God, make this better.
I cant do this everyday.
Yet each day is unwelcomed
With the pain and memories
It never fades, and is always there.
Nothing and Noone will ever change that
As if there is anyone there
I deal with this
Alone
As I have been for my entire life
Welcome to my hell.
Author notes
I dont really care. Its my life, my emotions and my style.
Dont really care.
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it cant be that bad can it?
i mean.. i know this is gonna sound lame as, and completely cliche, but we both have kids who we would do anything for, how can a life with children who are happy and healthy possibly be a hell?
I don't wanna slap you in the face with your own words, but, life really isn't as bad as we make it out to be.
I hope everything starts to look up so I dont have to see poems like this anymore
well written hun
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Your right, like always lol, Its just one of those "moments" I have, I tend to write better about sad depressing shit than happy kitty and candy stuff lol
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Oh you care, trust me on that. This is truly a heartwrenching and painful poem. So much passion and emotion here. The flow is great and the structure on point. Even though you say you dont care I am still going to point out the things I found thst need correcting, cuz thats what I do. In line 7 skies should be sky since there is really only one sky. And in line 21 the n in noone shouldnt be capitalized. Other than that, truly an amazing write. One last thong, you will never be alone, that I promise you. I will always be here to be your friend even if sometimes it doesnt seem like it.
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