Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Be Gone...

Cast aside thy mighty sword,
for thee have brought shame to your name,
white charger of grace be gone,
for your master is no more worthy.

Sire, the head upon your neck shall fall,
dishonour be your plea, or not at all,
for thy callous show of detriment has been found,
and a maidens heart be torn.

For in this kingdom none shall walk freely,
as such as thee bring sorrow and shame,
thy taking of life will bring no more,
that which darkens our days.

Life of a maiden fair is pure and sacrament,
and should be found held so,
stripped of tortured beats you left,
as your own shall stop this day.

Be gone....

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Knight70 silver member
    October 6

    Edit | Reply

    Aye, thou art lionhearted indeed!

    Have at thee, brother! Thy fair maiden hath been dishonoured this day. Remove their cowardly heads if thee must! Fair thee well, my brother.

    Sir Don


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    August 16
    Edit | Reply
    what passionate words you have written for your lady fair. exquisite and beautiful tale.

  • SIGHS

    my Knight thy words doth show honor and thy maidens heart thou hath won...for good shall aways rise with the morning sun thou art loved by me