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Life of Crime

I sit on the couch
beside my little sister
our eyes glued to the TV
both of us
with a stupid goofy smile
on our faces

"Liar liar plants for hire"
She quotes with Partick
"It's pants on fire, Patrick"
I quote with Spongebob

It's like our second personas
We know the lines better than the characters do

We sit
and get lost in our own
nautical adventure
both kind of wishing
we lived in a pineapple
under the sea

like
Spongebob Squarepants

Author notes

I titled the piece "Life of Crime" because that's the name of the episode where I got the quotes of the show from.

Lina, my little sister, and I really do this all the time. And I can practically quote whole episode by myself. We're a tad bit obsessed... In the most normal way possible. XD;

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