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"My Lost Hope"

I saw a sad little girl today
Whose balloon had just been let free
Whose heart was broken for the first time
And I thought, She reminds me of me.
The thing in her that she loved torn away
As she stood there watching it fade
Helpless she couldn't retrieve her love
So she got on her knees and prayed.

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I love how I can write a poem about my pain and almost feel better after wards..

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