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Lost In Translation




Lost In translation...........It may have been the transmission........

My eyes continued to follow him in every direction,
when he looked back
I quickly turned my head,
to find a car window or anything see-through that
would allow me to see his reflection,

There's still a connection.....

I can see a glimmer of hope in his eyes
and for that reason, I look away shy,
feeling every bit of five years old again....
But he and I both know its better this way,
for our protection.....
I'm feeling telepathically inclined,
knowing our Hearts and Bodies wouldn't Mind
playing a steady game of confession....

I seldom contemplate now and again....

What happened to us?
Who or what severed our connecting?
How is it we're both married,
but did not attend the same wedding?
As these thoughts are quieted in my head
silenced by revelation,
I suddenly remember all too well
it was missed communication
the signal transmitted.....

Lost in translation....

©Copyright 2009rmc
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  • P: it really provoked me with each stanza because this love seems so powerful that all of her words are coming straight from the heart and as the reader you can feel it just hit your body as you read each word

    Suggestions: when using many periods just use three more then that in my mind takes away from the poem, with three you know that they are implying many periods and there meaning.

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