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[ I landed here ]

I landed here
In this darkening place
the hills are alive
with the eyes
of millions who've forgotten.
The structure falters
the truth is squandered
    and decorating the canopy
    like a shroud, the leaves
    whither with the seasons
              This Earthen crown,
              worn red like armor,
              is a halo of certain light
    but poisons, toxins saturate the sky
    -the fish are bleeding human waste
      and the birds are breathing our language

I landed here
but in the morning
She'll be gone

                                              So I shall go and follow

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