Stone on a mountain pushed aside
Vein opens up and a spring cascades
Water rose down gaining speed
Give as the river cause the river we meet
Mothers wash their new born babes
As the river takes their sins away
Valley for the people and the flood for crop
Welcome every thunder drop
Ignore the child who fish for fun
The river brings fish for the fisherman
Pass through towns and factories
Take all their sins down to the sea
Make a list,
Put your troubles on a list,
Make a boat from the list,
Put the boat on the water and pretend that it never,
Never
Never
Never existed.
The rivers dont lie to us,
So why is it the bridge you cross?
And not the river?
Talk to those who chose to hear
Has a voice for everyone
Scare the young and calm the old
Respect and respected the difference shows
The river, the river is no more
Make a list,
Put your troubles on a list,
Make a boat from the list,
Put the boat on the water and pretend that it never,
Never
Never
Never existed.
The river dont lie to us,
So why is it the bridge you cross?
And not the river?
Author notes
2. The River
A contest entry
- LOTS OF TITLES. GIVE IT A LOOK SEE! [MANY DARK PROMPTS] by redhanded.
850 points, ended September 16, 42 entries
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very nice write you have here. poetically beautiful. thanks so much for entering. if you could please place your option number and title in the author notes, it would be greatly appreciated as it helps me to judge fairly. any questions on how to do that,please feel free to message me
best of luck to you in this contest and in the future
andi
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thank you!
i put it in the notes
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Awesome :)
love it lydz, you're amazing- DONT DENY IT. -
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ohh denied it
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How do you write like this?!
So.. mysterious yet understandable.. i cant even spell let alone write a poem as amazing as this!
Love it Lyds (:
You are truly fabulouso (:
LOVE YOU BILLIONS AND MILLIONS AND TRILLIONS AND A LOAD OF OTHER WORDS ENDING IN ONS (:
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amazing!!! seriously you rock!
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love it. your such an amazing writer.
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very deep, and in touch with nature. beautifully written. loved it
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Brilliant!!!!
[speechless]
this is amazing and really well written. Excellent!
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