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Unquenchable Thirst



Burning, yearning, unquenchable thirst;
Drink it in the morning, first things first.
Mix it in tonic, put it on ice,
Or drink it up straight and double it twice.

Swizzle it, guzzle it, pour it all night,
Bleary eyes red in the morning light.
Whisky,  Bourbon, Scotch and Rye;
Love it to death till the day that you die. 


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  • Native Ameri Girl
    July 19
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    Truer words were never spoken

    Great piece!!!! Muchas Gracias!!!! Siempre, Native American Girl!!!


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    July 18

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    I fancy a good Irish whiskey myself, and of course in moderation.

    Impeccable rhyme sir, well done.


  • wishintreeUK
    July 18

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    "inebriated" is definately the operative word here Moses! this fits the contest to a "tee"... in the second stanza, you have the "hard stuff" all listed, the second line of that stanza sums up the morning after very well!

    Well done.

    Katie


  • Never Fall in Love
    July 17
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    This is definitely an upbeat, rhythemic rhyme - and about the hard stuff? YES!