You can set down
your chisel
there's nothing left
to take away.
Your eyes,though,
see only imperfections.
I've done all I can
you've taken so much,
I can't stand
on my own two feet.
(ignore every flinch,
it's only paranoia)
Beauty,though,
is in the eyes of the beholder;
you behold no beauty,
only flawful circumstance.
You can set down
your chisel,
There's Nothing Left!
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9 really liek this piece, its really well written and shows your emotions really well
great job!
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Sincere
It's short but it still conveys your emotions very well.
I'm not so good at writing short stanzas......
Awesome writing overall
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wow. very very emotional write. love it, as well as I love the title too. perfect for the poem to follow. great write and keep up the good work. best of luck to you in the future and with your writing
andi
(redhanded)
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wow. powerful words.
beautiful poem.
"ignore every flinch,
it's only paranoia"
loved that line<3 -
I really love your emotion and word choice, this is so beautifully written. Keep writing! you have talent, thanks for sharing
x
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Wow.....thanks so much for sharing this with the Group ....Beautiful Minds, Dark Addictions.....I enjoyed your choice of grammar and the emotion they represent.....blessings,
Bear -
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Great write! Something most all of us can relate to on a personal level.
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I love this poem...It's very true.People do love there inperfection seeking...
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This is really good! it reminded me of a song. i dont care for it but u might
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lDICG3l6Ajk
xoxoxox
~Mask
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