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Breakthrough in the Night

When the blue night starts
And the lights go off in the city
When the fire strikes
Between blurry thoughts that dance so pretty

Behind shut eyes
The passion within takes a hold of me....
And it goes:

Firefly, take off in the moonlight
Cottontail, run careless and free
Nightingale, sing out your melody

When the images
Float fuzzy and warm through my minds' eye
And all consciousness
Turns to idle discovery

Behind shut eyes
The passion within takes a hold of me...
And it goes:

Firefly, take off in the moonlight
Cottontail, run careless and free
Nightingale, sing out your melody

Sing out your melody...

Firefly...off in the moonlight
Cottontail...careless and free
Nightingale...sing out your melody

Author notes

A song I wrote a while back...

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