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Believer

O! thee, believer:
Enlarge the boundaries
And ban them from thy mind.
Let thy thoughts float
Beyond te horizon,
And taste the sweetness of joy.

O! thee, believer:
Cross the last frontier
For thy world will be safe.
Let thy soul float
Beyond that golden door
Of honesty and purity.

O! thee, believer:
Follow the last tracks of a soldier
Who has never seen a gun.
Let thy heart float
Beyond all prejudice,
White as snow or black as night.

O! thee, believer:
Live the future every day,
And share thy sacred world.
Let thy footprints float
Beyond all pride,
A path for others to follow,

Forever to believe...

O! my dream.

Josi R.
September 09, 2008

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  • LittleAnn
    July 18
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    Wow. I'm speechless. This is so beautiful.

  • this is great! i like the depth you express here. you are a very deep thinker. your passion and heart comes through loud and clear. please feel free to suggest other pieces that you would like for me to read.