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Go Into All The Kingdom*

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I awoke, early one morning,

Didn't get much zees.

God, spoke to me ,

"I'm not very pleased"

I went to the den,

Placed, my bible, in my hand.

God said to read,

"Hear the Son of man"

Tired and humbled, *

"God said do not rebel"

Jesus spoke,"hear my servant",*

The gates of hell shall not prevail"

I asked for a desire, 

 I might read His word again.

Then He replied, 

Repent the times at hand.

I wrestled with that thought, 

Holding fast to prayer .

Asking Him to reassure me,

 Forgive me while He's near.

He breathed within His Spirit,*

A new heart He gave.*

To walk in His Spirit*

I'm thankful I am saved*

,His word began unfolding,

 Like scroll, let down from heaven.*

" He said, tho' you've sinned, much,"*

 I forgive you seventy times seven*

I felt, such delight,

In the Son of man.

"He said, "Go into all the world"

Tell all the time is at hand.

The Harvest, is truly plentiful,

 The laborers are few.

"Go Into the all world",

Preach the gospel of good news.*

 

 

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 Praise God!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Incaseyouneedme
    November 15
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    Yo

    the way to go-----Yo!----the lord's way----nice poem


  • AlexandraHamilton
    September 10
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    An encouraging, well-written poem! I did notice that there are some typos, but that's the only thing! Keep writing and reading

  • pkoirish
    July 20

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    images images

    great poem and imagery especially this stanza. Then a light appeared

    In the form of a man


    his voice sounded familar

    Quite gentle indeed

    It didn't scream and howl

    And neither did it decieve

    your words are a gift.. thank you

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    I love it. Speaking about how Jesus and God are youre strength and light. It speak voulumes what everyone should feel deep in thier soul