fierce in its forceful freedom
a bullet sent to target
get out of its way
it may hit the barrier
of arrogance and lack of wisdom
this is the carrier
of destruction:
power greed in competition
let the bullet hit the eye
send it not astray in lie
sight then in
explosion
Author notes
Photo: "One Bright Bulb" - Introvert Island
Prompt: the fruit of peace is eaten in Angst.
In a list
A contest entry
- Music For Airports by Red Rocket.
1000 points, ended July 29, 3 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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fierce in its forceful freedom
let there be light
this is a daily prayer of mine poetess
let the bruised minds heal,
so all may see the light
your light shines brightly throuh your creation
God bless you my friend...
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Excellent!
Very nice Myra...let there be light! So many people anymore just follow like blind sheep in the darkness and fightfor what they think is right.There is only one way, I only wish we could all agree on that. Maybe I translated your words the wrong way but this is what i took from it. Good luck in the contest Myra!!!! ~Laura
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How beautifully you have sketched the imbalances of the life's truth..and the immages brought here to prove yourself, are very strongly knitted..well done...
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Let there be light in the blinded eyes of this world.
Let there be peace.
Again you have created a parable of wisdom hidden from these that strain to see and never see nothing.
Hopefully the Light will shoot the shells off blinded eyes.
I wish you luck in the contest pretty poetess.
There is beauty in the Light of love.
It shines on your face and through your eyes.
It becomes you.
Much love,
Judy
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