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Poetry

Poetry

garbage,


          words,
                  worms,


          and half dones...
                              .
                            "
                        .
                        ?   
                      .
                    !
                   
.
you think...........
                 
             


 

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  • just mercedes gold member
    July 17

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    I so agree with you here - 'words, worms and half dones...'

    haunting, the evocation of response - do I think? now I'm not sure