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Save This Savior

Save my fucking soul
From the demons in my hell
And damnation well abound
With salvation caged in prison cells

To save a savior from utter chaos
And of worlds utter death
Among parasites in mortal souls
With angels lost in faith

With faith no longer living
And beliefs forgotten past
Save this savior from himself
And humanity's fiery grasp

Grant me life no longer
With my hands no stained in blood
From this world with faith oblivion
In a world of damnists' flood

Save this savior's soul
Lying damned upon an ankh
You Shadow Christ returns to you
When the skies are raining blood.

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  • Melee Vau gold member
    September 4
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    savagely beautiful

    cool poem from a dark place.  like the foreboding damnation behind every word.