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Crush

Her edible thighs surge,
leading her through the tide.
Ecstasy swells up around her,
threatening to pull her under.
Lightening strikes the water,
as it boils under her, she ignites.
Glowing, she rides the ripples,
their tenacity growing by the second.
Her fierce melody emanates.
Beckoning the world to join her,
swell with her, climb the sky with her,
before she breaks on the pristine reef below.
Whirling with voracity,
only to tenderly recede and begin all over.

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  • ajocean silver member
    September 7
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    fab just fab


  • CaliOkie silver member
    July 18

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    OK, WOW. You always bring such warmth to your sensuality . . . such a closeness and love. That is the difference between a ripple and a tidal wave . . . and you write of it with such care and . . . almost reverence. You blend the spiritual with the flesh with such a genuine sense of feeling.

    Very well done.

    Garrison

  • This is so HOT!!! The new pic kinda suits the mood of the piece as well. The multiple and the mutual, nothing much finer now, is there?
    Peace

  • Lotus Papa
    July 17

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    spectacular!!

    Very erotic and full of passion, you make it so very easy to love you with everything i have. being able to tell you anything and everything without remorse or regret.


  • Lowell Poe
    July 17

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    Ok.....................good night everybody.....
    i need a smoke..............
    This is seiously written very well.......
    I'll be right over......

    Love,
    Liam

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