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Sensing Summer.

Early is the dawn

that brings me sunshine

it opens the smiling flowers

that fragrants my path

to tranquillity...

 

 

And as each dose

of vitiman D

penetrates my skin to ripe,

I tingle with the joys

of Summer.

 

 

 

Tingling with the freedom

of long walks

in Tall grassed meadows

where I lose myself

in thought of finding me again...

 

 

Once found,

I contentedly kick my way home

through the dandelion beds

where their seed fall like feathers

aroud me and as though 

an angels just shook

his wings to say Hello.

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  • crivanea silver member
    August 1

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    I have to admit...I really like the last stanza the ending was just perfect...almost like a KU anyways..a lovely depiction of summer..well written poet


  • Puppydog gold member
    July 18

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    BEAUTIFUL!!!!!

    This beautifully describes summer so well! I love being out in nature's beauty, seeing the scenery and animals. 's


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    July 17

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    you make me yearn! we know all about angel wings
    love that last stanza dear sister

    Juls


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    July 17

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    Beautifully inspiring artistry...

    I only wish I could be there too, Dolores. Wishing you all the best!!
    Loves ya,
    xx Cyn xx


  • Pure Thought silver member
    July 17

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    The whole poem is beautiful... but had to smile at the dandelions and angel wings... how wonderful a thought.


  • Cannonsfire
    July 16

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    Sounds just like Donegal to me C

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