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Everytime You Smile

Sometime i'm an ogre,
I'm vile in every way.
Everytime i see your smile,
It all just melts away.

Sometime i'm a gobblin,
I'm very narrow minded.
Everytime i see your smile,
I'm very nearly blinded.

Sometimes i'm a devil,
I'm very hard to please,
Everytime i see your smile,
I fall down to my knees.

When i'm all these things in one,
You won't be able to stop me.
You'll be having to much fun,
So when i finally see your smile.

I know that your the one!

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  • Rexidatious
    July 17

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    Wow I really enjoyed that poem!! It flowed nicely rhymed nicely, and is the kind of style I like to write in! well done!