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Michigan.

cool breeze,
at ease.
warm sun,
never runs.
old home,
i roamed.
too late,
not my fate.

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this is about where i used to live.
i'm visiting & now going home.
short poem to show my feelings.

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  • something.more
    July 18
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    awee; i miss youu soo much! i can't believe i missed seeing youuu!! :'(
    PSS:: this is pretty good!