Baby? Baby can you hear me?
I had an amazing day today.
I dreamed of you.
Did you dream of me too?
How was your day?
Did everything go well?
You said you had that important meeting thing today.
Was it okay?
Can't sleep?
Want me to sing to you,
you always said you could sleep hearing my voice.
Baby, I miss you.
It's been a whole day since i talked to you.
I'm away on this stupid trip.
Even though we arent saying anything,
I know that your there and that i can think of you.
Has it really been 7 hours?
I love you baby.
I want to be there with you.
Remember that last night i was there and we talked and talked and talked?
I don't think that I will make it through this week with out you.
Can you come visit me?
I will call you every night.
Even when we dont talk
you make me feel good just knowing your on the other end.
Baby, Tell me anything so I can hear your voice.
I want to hear your voice one last time
This is my last Breath.
One more word, just so that in the after life, i can remember your voice.
A contest entry
- Looking for a AP Wife by sOuL.
490 points, ended July 22, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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Wow this is so sad!
Something that no one should ever have to feel.
Thanks for your entry here and good luck!
Jeremy0826 -
Terrific write! Keep up the great writing! Major kudos to you on this!
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wow this is brilliant! you deserve to win!!
gr8 write
xx
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i have to write something same to all the entries
1. Thanks for joining the contest
2. I wish you all the best that you win
3. If you have entered the contest and written something cute'n'sweet i assume you have written it from heart, if not then please let me know that you only written it for winning the contest, not really be my ap wife.
Thank You
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Mmm...
It struck me as very sad toward the end... Very sad. But it was a beautiful write and very enjoyable. Well done.
~Sera
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WOW! Up until the last verse, this sounds so much like my love and I...
what a great job you did on this one!
Best of luck in this contest!
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