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vulnerable.

"take me to a place where iloveyou is redundant,"
said through bitter tears.
i am tired, unfixable..
luckily, i'm replaceable.
i sat on the sidewalk and got stepped on.
so i caught the disease, or took the vaccine..
i only know you can't come back.

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  • XXAgedWithDespairXx
    July 17
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    Haunting. I like the imagery. Really empty...bleak.
    I like it.