Though your eyes a rose I just a rose,Though my eyes I see a world of color and love, a rose may die but the presents of the rose will always be, the happyness and warmth is always there,Days may pass but love is still in the air,cause the rose will always be.
A contest entry
- Deep Thinkers Picture Prompt #1 by delightfulmess.
1800 points, ended September 2, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Lovely... I like your message here.
thank you so much for entering and for you patience in my contest.
Love,
Delila
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a rose may die but the presents of the rose will always be
I absolutly love this line. This is true for so many things. Great use of meterphor in this poem! -
I love the imagery you put into this
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THIS IS GOOD SIS LOVE IT
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