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Icy Girl

Filled wilth broken promises and broken dreams,
Nobody understands her, or so it seems.
These city streets are full, yet she's all alone.
Alone with this heart she made of stone.



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I am writing this with Icy Girl. I have no idea when it will be finished or what it will be about. lol Keep an eye on it.

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  • Barry Hodges silver member
    September 14

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    Well, it's quite Ok to start with! Maybe just end it here? After all, short and sweet and to the point is better than dragged out and repetitive, innit?


  • Aelten
    July 24
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    Looks like a great start


  • tearyeyedbutterfly
    July 17
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    Awesome write! It's very detached...I love it.