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Coyote Ugly

They danced on the bar
sang a song or two
Mixed up drinks
and overflowing with attitude
Innocent Violet landed her job
as a bar maid
they showed her the ropes
and shared jokes
One got her in big trouble
when she
hosed down the building inspecter
when he asked for a glass of water
They had to come up with
a large amount of money
to keep Coyote Ugly open
Pretty Violet batted her eyes
as she raffled off
a guy she met
It was all for fun
as he took a piece of clothing off
Them woman getting excited
yelling take it off
and bidding higher
They end up making more
then they needed
He left with his date
when Violet got off work
She ran into him outside
and she asked how the date was
I guess the lady was so drunk
she passed out
At Coyotee Ugly
there are intoxicating
sexy men
and woman

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Darlene Long

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  • DistilledGin
    July 24
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    Interesting..

    I really like your take on this contest. Thanks for entering. Keep up the good writing. ~Gin

  • *chuckle°

    I remember the movie version many years ago. The women were the best part about the film. Thanks for helping to bring back some fond memories for me.