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Coincidence?

I was so thick
so utterly blear-eyed.
You were so bright

so ironically alert.
I believed in fairy-tales
You believed in logic.
Coincidence?

I think not.

 

I was becoming scintillating

so powerfully brilliant.

You were becoming dim-witted

so pathetically idiotic.

I was doing well.

You were doing poorly.

Coincidence?

I think not.

 

I laugh at you now.

Always trying to make me do worse

and make you do-by comparison- better..

 

You say I got it all wrong.

I correct your improper English.

You get mad

I just smile...

Because I've already won.

 

Author notes

Okay the story behind this poem.

There's this used-to-be apathetic guy named Zach. I really hate him and when I'm being nice he's mean. when I mean he's nice.

So I got him mad and smiled.. because I totally beat him at his mind games. I used a big word

yay?

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 4

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    Good write here

    Yes many people like to play mind games but I have found those who criticise others often are worse off than those being criticsised so hold your ground


  • longte
    October 12

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    Sometimes it is not worth winning
    When winning causes the destruction of something else you need to be sure the destruction was worth the prize
    In saying that this was nicely put together


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 3

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    It is always good when you gain the upper hand; I've had mates like this through my life and in the end we always fell over laughing at our silliness

    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • condor gold member
    August 22

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    Sorry to say but this one had me giggling. I can think back to when I was in school and knew someone who fitted this bill. Only difference was, I punch him in the nose. Never bothered me again. Great write and keep up the great work. Don't take s**t from anyone.


  • Miss Chievous
    August 13
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    lol! yay!


  • Another Stranger
    July 18
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    wow you just hate every one don't you?


  • Blind Sight
    July 18
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    Hehe. Great poem, and good for you


  • DontObjectifyMe
    July 17

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    Haha this is an awesome way to tell the story. Big YAY!
    Awesomeness in poetic form lol
    xxoxoxoxoxx


  • nichtmich silver member
    July 16

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    Yay! Who needs friends like that? Smile and let him simmer. Good poem, great imagery. You tell a good story here, yes people and their mind games are too weird sometimes

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