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Damned to darkness

the darkness sweeps in
around the red rose of life

taking it in without an explanation
damned to the darkness is the red roes of life

the happiness that was once saw
was murdered by the darkness

the darkness swooped in
chewed it up, spit it out

the broken red roes of like
weeps a single tear

fate took over
the damned flower

put it through hell
killing every last bit of happiness

the petals tattered and torn
fall to the ground to hide the last bit of life

killing the happiness of those around
damning them to the darkness

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    September 2

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    A very profound piece here it has a very intense vibe,
    Well done. I also love you background!!!

    thank you so much for entering and also for you patience.


    Delila