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Ova Obsession

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Impetuous woman
smile, grab, run
pieces of reality
never the whole

Abrupt and sudden
head against rock
fist against steel
more beauty than brain

Headlong into the day
rash, without thought
crashing impatient lover
eager, reckless and rude

As hasty, as hot
as forcible as sharp
Fiery, rapid, heady
give thought to life

Impinge, impale, release
Vena labials, if I
your lips prevail
you will smile
          inside out.

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