She is the all-knowing judge,
Of artful skills to be had.
The voice of reasoning,
Of people to be heard.
The knowledge gained,
From years of experience.
The most desirable intellect,
Of things that can be learned.
She is everywhere you are,
Understanding the things you do.
She is showing you and telling you,
Wisdom, an ancient knowledge.
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a different style than what i usually read but enjoyable nonetheless
I really liked "Wisdom, an ancient knowledge." the way you sort of worded it backwards. keep up the good work
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I feel that you spend too much of the poem TELLING US rather than showing us. -
This poem to me seems to be missing something, like who "she" is, and how or why is she giving out this knowledge. This just seems incomplete to me. Thank you for entering the "Fight for the Gold contest, best of luck to you in the judging... Scott
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Great diction.
I like it.
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Oh wow! Love it, it's very deep. Great write hun! Keep up the great writing!
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