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The Sea is in your heart

The sea is in your heart,
with waves of emotions
and the key to life.

Winds of storms
come and go.
Bringing up
the beauty
from below.

The sea within your
heart, is ever so
changing.
The sea is in your heart...

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Sea with your heart

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    August 4
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    This was good, but in all honesty
    it could be better. You've repeated
    "the sea is in your heart" twice,
    and I didn't really feel much
    from the write.

    But needless to say, you put
    forth a good effort, and I
    did enjoy reading

    Best of luck & thanks for entering


  • perfectsunset gold member
    July 16

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    Your prompt:

    I took from the title of the BG
    you created:

    Sea with your heart

    http://allpoetry.com/poem/4993047